SLIDE 26 Design Review Follow-Up for Dec07-03
Following the design review, several suggestions were made on how the project could be improved. The following outlines what improvements were suggested:
- There needs to be a more in depth and complete overview of how the spreadsheet
will take the inputs and achieve the necessary outputs. What was given in the presentation was not nearly enough to demonstrate what needs to occur in that
- area. More equations and descriptions are needed.
- Firm decisions need to already have been made on all aspects of the project.
There should be no areas with uncertainty about what will be accomplished.
- When describing the project, it must be clearly stated that the scope of the project
will be limited to residential buildings in the state of Iowa.
- Research on incentives needs to be drastically scaled down. Rather than give
specific examples, a statement stating that incentives are available will be provided.
- The description of the economic considerations needs to be changed. Currently,
the description provides an inaccurate view of what is meant in the statement.
- The bullets in the presentation need to be shorter, and the grammar needs to be
improved.
- The gradients used in determining the outputs need to be clearly defined as linear
- r geometric.
- Explain what exactly is meant by a “lumped load”, and explain why it is needed.
- Add to the assumptions that additional wiring will not be included in the total
cost.
- For equations with coefficients, explain what they are and where they are coming
from.
- There needs to be more assurance that the project will be completed on time.
- Not enough information is given on fuel cells, more is needed.
- More emphasis is needed on identifying the primary and secondary systems in the
modes of operations.
- Knowledge of the rate structure is needed in addition to the current rate.
- The difference between petroleum generators and microturbines needs to be better
defined.
- More information about the building’s structural integrity is needed in order to
determine if a roof mounted solar system is feasible.
- The total cost of the system needs to be added as an output.
- A test case needs to be incorporated in order to test the system.