STAR moments and wonder Telling Stories with Data December 6, 2017
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Translation “…the task of the translator consists in finding that intended effect upon the language into which he is translating which produces in it the echo of the original” Walter Benjamin, The Task of the Translator
A une Damoyselle Malade To a Sick Damsel Fairest Friend My Sweet Dear [Prose version] Clément Marot (1537) Ma mignonne, My sweet Fairest friend, My sweet dear, My small princess, I Je vous donne I bid you Let me send I send cheer— send you a warm hello. Le bon jour; A good day; My embrace. All the best! Your long stay in bed Douglas Hofstader Le séjour The stay Quit this place, Your forced rest has been like a term in C’est prison. Is prison. Its dark halls Is like jail. prison. Uncle Clement Guérison Health And dank walls. So don't ail urges you to 1.It is made up of 28 lines. Recouvrez, Recover, In soft stealth, Very long. recuperate, and to get Puis ouvrez Then open Regain health: Just get strong— out of there soon. 2.Each line has 3 syllables. Votre porte Your door, Dress and flee Go outside, You've always loved 3.The stress falls on the last Et qu’on sorte And go out off with me, Take a ride! sweets, so don't let Vitement, Quickly, Clement, who Do it quick, being bed-ridden stop of these syllables. Car Clément For Clément Calls for you. Stay not sick— you from indulging— Le vous mande. Tells you to. Fine gourmet, Ban your ache, have some jam! And 4.It is a series of rhyming Va, friande Go, indulge Hid from day, For my sake! don't stay sick too long, couplets (AA BB CC DD…) De ta bouche, Of thy mouth, Danger's past, Buttered bread because you'll get Qui se couche Lying abed So at last While in bed ghostly pak and start 5.After line 14 the formal En danger In danger, Let 's be gone, Makes a mess, looking like skin and "vous" is replaced by the Pour manger Off to eat To dine on So unless bones. God will surely more colloquial "tu". Confitures; Fruit preserves; Honeyed ham You would choose bring you back to good Si tu dures If thou stay’st And sweet jam. That bad news, health, my small 6.The last line echoes the Trop malade, Too sick, If you're still I suggest princess. first. Couleur fade Pale shade Wan and ill, That you'd best Tu prendras, Thou wilt acquire, You will cede Soon arise, Literalist 7.The poet slips his own Et perdras And wilt lose Pounds you need. So your eyes name into the poem. L’embonpoint. Thy plump form. May God's wealth Will not glaze. Functionalist Dieu te doint God grant thee Bless your health Douglas prays Santé bonne, Good health, Till the end, Health be near, Conceptual Ma mignonne. My sweet. Fairest friend. My sweet dear.
My sweet girl My dear friend, Sweetie Pie, Clément Marot (1537) please unfurl, Here I send First off: Hi. it is day. You my best. (Hashtag hug.) Join the fray, This ain’t rest, Why not shrug Douglas Hofstader blow the pen It’s a trap; Off the sheet o’bedridden! Grab your cap. And retreat Salve with haste, Feel alive, From the bed? 1.It is made up of 28 lines. leave this place! Flee the hive, Clear your head— 2.Each line has 3 syllables. End those snores Through the door. You’ll feel swell- Out the door! Go explore. What the hell! 3.The stress falls on the last Quick my sprout, As Clement Out we’ll go, go get out! of these syllables. Said he’d want. Catch a show It’s Matt’s rule. Go indulge, Hit the zoo 4.It is a series of rhyming Stop your drool Feed the bulge, Go canoe, and fill up! All tucked up Grab a beer couplets (AA BB CC DD…) Mouth to cup! there to sup Far from here. 5.After line 14 the formal Although bed Jellied fruits. Come on, please: and warm bread Listen, toots, Herbal teas "vous" is replaced by the sound real nice, Get well soon And some toast more colloquial "tu". do think twice. Or new moon Are a most You’ll get white, Turns your twin; Awful snack. 6.The last line echoes the thin and slight! Pale and thin. Don’t lie back first. Please bestow From on high, And just snore: your warm glow The big guy What a bore! 7.The poet slips his own Upon us here Hopes you mend, Rise and shine name into the poem. amongst your peers. My dear friend. Darling mine, Heal young pearl. Len says try, My sweet girl. Sweetie Pie.
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