SLIDE 3 Tues write a newspaper report.notebook October 19, 2020
W.A.L. to write a newspaper report
Here is my example! Please don't copy all my ideas but you can magpie some if you like them!
SHOCKING ATTACK TAKES PLACE ON KID AT CAMP By Miss Betts
Yesterday, at Broarwood Nature Reserve, 11-year-old August Pullman was attacked by a gang of older youths while on a school trip with the rest of his classmates. August (who is known to his friends and family as Auggie) was at the nature reserve as he was on a school trip. Sadly, Auggie has Treacher-Collins syndrome - which gives his face a characteristic appearance- making him very vulnerable. The terrible incident took place when Auggie was in the woods during a movie
- night. Him and a friend were approached
by a group of youths who verbally abused Auggie (calling him names like an orc and Alien) and then attacked him physically causing home to fall down. To make matters worse, Auggie's specially designed hearing aids were damaged in the incident and he was not able to find them.
lead paragraph which answers the 4ws P1 - explaining why Auggie was there and his condition. P2 - explain the incident. Be careful not to write it like a story- we are just covering the main events.
I hope you are impressed with all the relative clauses I used! Once you have written yours, send me a picture on Class Dojo or on the blog! I can't wait to read it! :)