SLIDE 1 Top Tips to Super Charge Your Next Fundraising Appeal
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2 DISCLAIMERS …
1) If You Solicit Me, I May Share Your Appeals 2) Personal Preference ≠ Fundraising Best Practice
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Let’s look at two examples …
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How do you get prospective donors to open & respond to your appeals?
SLIDE 21 #1 begin the body with a story, that starts with a killer
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SLIDE 22 ABC Nonprofit finished the year strong by meeting its fundraising goal and serving 300 additional children this year …
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Johnny didn’t go to school last week because something was wrong.
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Just the other day, Marci walked into our facility with a big problem.
SLIDE 27 Last week, I was walking down the hall and stumbled upon something magical.
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story characteristics
SLIDE 29 story characteristics
PERSON, place or thing
- Rich detail (create a vivid picture)
- Brings up a SOLVABLE problem
- And …
SLIDE 30 #2 make the donor the HERO of the story
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SLIDE 32 donor = hero
- Use “you” and “your” at least twice
as much as “my,” “we” and “our”
- “Without you, none of this would
have happened.”
- BOY: “Because of you, Johnny has
a safe place to sleep tonight.”
- It’s about the DONOR (your/your),
not you or the organization (my/we/our).
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SLIDE 34 #3 assure that your Call To Action (CTA) is clear
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ask the reader to do ONE thing, and only ONE thing: DONATE
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ask for a specific amount 1.5x last donation
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ask more than once repeat the CTA using different words
SLIDE 38 use hard asks
- “Your donation of $50 or more,
sent by April 30th, will provide meals for 20 families.”
- “Please join me in supporting this
wonderful cause.”
- “Won’t you make your gift right
now?”
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- “You make it possible”
- “Without you, none of this would
be possible”
- “Your support is essential”
SLIDE 40 #4 make it urgent
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Why should I give today, rather than wait three months?
SLIDE 42 ways to show urgency
- People (or animals) won’t survive
- A window of opportunity will
close (matching funds)
- Conditions are going to change
- Tell them what will happen if they
don’t give, TODAY
SLIDE 43 #5 don’t forget the P.S.
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The P.S. is the one part of the letter that is almost guaranteed to be read (90%)
SLIDE 45 use the P.S. to repeat your call to action
- “Won’t you join me and help the
kids today with a $100 donation?”
- “Your vital donation of $1,000 will
be put to work immediately and will have a HUGE impact on our local community.”
SLIDE 46 #6 aim for 2 pages
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SLIDE 47 page count has a connotation
- 1 page = It must not be that
important if they can say it in one page
- 3+ pages = They’re just droning on
and on
SLIDE 48 how to get to 2 full pages
– Repeat the story another way – Repeat the story from another viewpoint – Repeat the ask (use hard & soft)
- Use one image per page
- Increase the font size
- Increase the line spacing
SLIDE 49 #7 make it readable
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SLIDE 50 keys to readable appeals
- Use a serif font
- Use black text
- Use 12 point font minimum (13-14 is
better)
- Indent paragraphs
- Keep paragraphs short (5 lines max)
SLIDE 51 keys to readable appeals
- Use a few 1 line paragraphs
- Use short sentences (fragments are
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- Don’t use big words (find a simpler
alternative)
– Option – Way
SLIDE 52 #8 emphasize key parts
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SLIDE 53 use strategic underlining
- Underline the Call to Action (CTA)
- Underline the most dramatic part of
the story
SLIDE 54 If they read just the underlines & the P.S. they will know:
- Who they are supposed to save
- How they can do it
- Why they have to do it NOW
SLIDE 55 #9 keep the package simple
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SLIDE 56 extra stuff does not equal extra money
- Minimize inserts
- No organizational brochure
- Just the letter, reply device &
reply envelope
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– What do you actually need? – What info would you love to have?
- No glossy stock
- Visually connect it to the appeal
letter (image / look / CTA)
SLIDE 61 #10 make sure it gets opened
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PICK THE RIGHT ENVELOPE
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SLIDE 67 most effective envelopes
- 1. Plain white, stamped, hand-
written, no organization name
- 2. Brightly colored
- 3. Oversized
- 4. Standard organization logo #10
with nonprofit indicia
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