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Inverted Commas

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Inverted Commas

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The Big Picture

To write a character description about your own 'Lost Thing'.

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LO: I can empathise with the emotions of a fictional character

see youtube teaching video

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by Shaun Tan Today, we are going to watch the animation of... As you are watching, make some notes about how the following characters are feeling throughout the story:

  • The Lost Thing
  • Shaun

What emotions do they go through and why? How do their emotions change? Do they empathise with each

  • ther?

Animation

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What words / phrases can we use to describe how each of these characters is feeling throughout the story? Fill in grid before moving onto next slide. Shaun The Lost Thing

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What words / phrases can we use to describe how each of these characters is feeling throughout the story? Shaun The Lost Thing

  • Interested in collections and things (bottle

top collection)

  • Inquisitive, intrigued
  • Concerned/caring (took it home)
  • Problem solver ­ Wants to help
  • needed to figure out what to do?
  • Couldn't just leave it wandering the streets.
  • Fed it ­ felt responsibility for it
  • Attentive ­ the only person
  • who noticed it
  • Sad to say goodbye and
  • thought of the Lost thing but
  • vertime forgot.
  • Melancholy
  • Excited for what's to come
  • Sad, lonely, desolate, worried, hopeless
  • Friendly ­ he was relieved to find Shaun.
  • Unique , strange
  • Felt out of place, different, not belonging
  • Lost ­ enjoyed Shawn's company
  • Happy to be looked after by Shaun
  • Trusts Shaun as he goes with him.
  • Sad to say goodbye to Shawn ­ he didn't just

leave ­ he gave him a wave.

  • Relieved to have found a place where he

belongs.

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Date: Imagine that you are either Shaun, or The Lost Thing. You are going to choose part of the story and write a description of your character's thoughts at that time, in the first person. Which part will you choose? Here are some ideas. LO: I can empathise with the emotions of a fictional character

Shaun on the beach working tirelessly on his bottle collection The moment when Shaun sees the lost thing When the lost thing is found by Shaun When the lost thing hears Shaun's parents reaction to him When Shaun is trying to figure out what to do with the lost thing On the tram into the city

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Date: Imagine that you are either Shaun, or The Lost Thing. You are going to choose part of the story and write a description of your character's thoughts at that time, in the first person. For example:

I'm definitely lost; I don't know where I am. Underneath me is a warm, soft surface made from billions of miniscule pieces. Slightly ahead of me is something noisy and blue that can move by itself - it advances towards me for a few seconds and then it turns and runs away. I'm surrounded by humans (of all shapes and sizes) and most of them are shrieking and hollering with delight. They seem to be bursting with happiness. I couldn't feel more different to them. I have been abandoned here and I feel desolate and alone. It's very isolating, being the only one of my kind. I wonder if anyone will notice me and offer to help? Someone seems to be looking at me from the top of the steps. It's a boy! His face is wearing an expression of curiosity and I think he's going to approach me. Hope is beginning to flow through my insides; maybe I am about to make a friend.

LO: I can empathise with the emotions of a fictional character

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QUICK­FIRE Deconstruction!

I'm definitely lost; I don't know where I am. Underneath me is a warm, soft surface made from billions of miniscule pieces. Slightly ahead of me is something noisy and blue that can move by itself - it advances towards me for a few seconds and then it turns and runs away. I'm surrounded by humans (of all shapes and sizes) and most of them are shrieking and hollering with delight. They seem to be bursting with happiness. I couldn't feel more different to them. I have been abandoned here and I feel desolate and

  • alone. It's very isolating, being the only one of my kind. I wonder if anyone

will notice me and offer to help? Someone seems to be looking at me from the top of the steps. It's a boy! His face is wearing an expression of curiosity and I think he's going to approach me. Hope is beginning to flow through my insides; maybe I am about to make a friend.

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Find five features Find six features

Write a sentence that could come next in this paragraph. Try to include a feature that hasn't been used already.

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Date: LO: I can empathise with the emotions of a fictional character

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Challenge Include parenthesis correctly using brackets, dashes or commas. Remember that if you take the parenthesis and the ESC away, the rest of the sentence should still make sense. Complete Silver. Also include a semicolon to join two main clauses together. Remember, each clause must be able to make sense on its own. Complete Bronze. Also include a rhetorical question and a relative clause beginning with a relative pronoun. Challenge - Once you have finished writing about your first character, do the same thing for the second character. I should see clear differences in their emotions between the two descriptions.

Draw a picture of your chosen character into your book. Next to it, write a paragraph describing their feelings at a chosen point in the story.

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Self-Assessment ......., I am pleased that I was able to use... Complete feedback question