Lesson 19 dashes chn.notebook May 13, 2020 Guidance for English Slides • Refer to year group planning for the sequence of lessons and resources required for each lesson. • Try to follow lessons in order. • Follow the lesson slides in order, reading each one carefully. If there are questions or tasks, try to answer these before reading answers on following pages. 1
Lesson 19 dashes chn.notebook May 13, 2020 Starter Bronze Silver As silver Gold Silver and bronze and add extra information to this sentence using parenthesis Stanley hoped a break would come soon as he needed some water. Look at the silver activity and explain why the incorrect sentences are wrong. 2
Lesson 19 dashes chn.notebook May 13, 2020 Starter Bronze Silver As silver Gold Silver and bronze and add extra information to this sentence using parenthesis E.g- Stanley hoped a break would come soon - if only for a minute - as he needed some water. The second sentence is incorrect because the second comma is missing after the embedded subordinate clause. The third sentence is incorrect because the first comma is missing before the embedded subordinate clause. 3
Lesson 19 dashes chn.notebook May 13, 2020 Date: L.O.To use a single dash at the end of a sentence to add extra information Today, we are learning how to include a dash to add extra information at the end of a sentence. We are doing this because this is something many of you are still not including this independently in your writing. 4
Lesson 19 dashes chn.notebook May 13, 2020 Date: L.O.To use a single dash at the end of a sentence to add extra information Bronze Write down three What thoughts and feelings words to describe would be going through his the thoughts and head? feelings of Stanley Silver Complete bronze & then you must justify why the character is feeling this way. Stanley digging his first hole Gold Complete silver and consider the effect Stanley's feelings have on his body. 5
Lesson 19 dashes chn.notebook May 13, 2020 Date: L.O.To use a single dash at the end of a sentence to add extra information Bronze Write down three What thoughts and feelings Drained words to describe would be going through his Isolated/lonely the thoughts and head? feelings of Stanley Silver Aching Complete bronze & then you must justify why the character is feeling Desperate Exhausted this way. Stanley digging his first hole Gold Complete silver and consider the effect Resentful Frustrated Dejected Stanley's feelings have on his body. 6
Lesson 19 dashes chn.notebook May 13, 2020 Date: L.O.To use a single dash at the end of a sentence to add extra information Pain coursed through every muscle - he was overcome with exhaustion. What is this punctuation? What job does it do? 7
Lesson 19 dashes chn.notebook May 13, 2020 Date: L.O.To use a single dash at the end of a sentence to add extra information Pain coursed through every muscle - he was overcome with exhaustion. It adds extra information. Both clauses can stand alone by themselves. The clauses must be relate to each other. 8
Lesson 19 dashes chn.notebook May 13, 2020 Date: L.O.To use a single dash at the end of a sentence to add extra information Has a dash been used correctly in each sentence below? Why? Remember, there MUST be a full sentence before and after the dash and the information after the dash MUST relate to the first sentence. 1. Stanley was exhausted and desperately wanted to - rest. 2. Sweating and panting, Stanley thought of ways he could get out of digging - he began eating breakfast. 3. With sadness in his heart, Stanley hung his head - he wish he could be at home. 9
Lesson 19 dashes chn.notebook May 13, 2020 Date: Answer L.O.To use a single dash at the end of a sentence to add extra information Has a dash been used correctly in each sentence below? Remember, there MUST be a full sentence before and after the dash and the information after the dash MUST relate to the first sentence. 1. Stanley was exhausted and desperately wanted to - rest. 2. Sweating and panting, Stanley thought of ways he could get out of digging - he began eating breakfast. 3. With sadness in his heart, Stanley hung his head - he wish he could be at home. 10
Lesson 19 dashes chn.notebook May 13, 2020 Date: L.O.To use a single dash at the end of a sentence to add extra information A single dash adds extra information to a full sentence. You MUST write a full sentence before you add a dash and extra information. Stanley looked over the network of holes - his heart sank. Feeling dejected, Stanley trudged to bed - he had never felt so low. Whiteboard work Stanley shook X-Ray's hand - Complete the third sentence and write two of your own sentences using a single dash 11
Lesson 19 dashes chn.notebook May 13, 2020 Date: Examples L.O.To use a single dash at the end of a sentence to add extra information A single dash adds extra information to a full sentence. You MUST write a full sentence before you add a dash and extra information. Stanley looked over the network of holes - his heart sank. Feeling dejected, Stanley trudged to bed - he had never felt so low. Whiteboard work Stanley shook X-Ray's hand - he knew they were friends now. Zero pierced his shovel quickly into the earth - Stanley had never seen anyone digging so quickly. 12
Lesson 19 dashes chn.notebook May 13, 2020 Date: L.O.To use a single dash at the end of a sentence to add extra information Put in the dash in the correct place in the sentence, for example, Bronze Envious and sorrowful, Stanley looked at Zero's hole - he wish he could dig faster. Silver Add relevant information after the dash. Stanley ate breakfast quickly - he was ravenous. Gold Write four or five sentences including a dash to add extra information at the end to express how Stanley is feeling. Include parenthesis - show me that you can use parenthetic dashes as well as a single dash. 13
Lesson 19 dashes chn.notebook May 13, 2020 Date: L.O.To use a single dash at the end of a sentence to add extra information Include parenthesis - show me that you can use parenthetic dashes as well as a single dash. • Stanley, whose arms ached, dropped the shovel in exhaustion - he had never felt such dejection. 14
Lesson 19 dashes chn.notebook May 13, 2020 Date: Answers L.O.To use a single dash at the end of a sentence to add extra information ‐Stanley ached all over ‐ never in his life had he worked so hard. ‐Stanley couldn’t understand why anyone would want to be called Armpit ‐ he didn’t like to think where the nickname came from. ‐A dull ache pulsated through Stanley’s muscles ‐ would he ever finish digging the hole? ‐Stanley thought of his parents faraway ‐ he wondered what they were up to. ‐Sinking to the ground, Stanley rubbed his arms ‐ that eased the pain slightly. 15
Lesson 19 dashes chn.notebook May 13, 2020 Date: Answers L.O.To use a single dash at the end of a sentence to add extra information 16
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