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Guidance for English Slides

• Refer to year group planning for the sequence of lessons and

resources required for each lesson.

• Try to follow lessons in order.
• Follow the lesson slides in order, reading each one carefully. If

there are questions or tasks, try to answer these before reading answers on following pages.

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Bronze Silver

Gold

As silver Silver and bronze and add extra information to this sentence using parenthesis Stanley hoped a break would come soon as he needed some water. Look at the silver activity and explain why the incorrect sentences are wrong.

Starter

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Bronze Silver

Gold

As silver Silver and bronze and add extra information to this sentence using parenthesis E.g- Stanley hoped a break would come soon - if only for a minute - as he needed some water.

The second sentence is incorrect because the second comma is missing after the embedded subordinate

• clause. The third sentence is incorrect because the first comma is missing before the embedded subordinate

clause.

Starter

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Today, we are learning how to include a dash to add extra information at the end of a sentence. We are doing this because this is something many of you are still not including this independently in your writing.

Date: L.O.To use a single dash at the end of a sentence to add extra information

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Bronze Silver Gold

Write down three words to describe the thoughts and feelings of Stanley

Complete silver and consider the effect Stanley's feelings have on his body. Complete bronze & then you must justify why the character is feeling this way.

Date: L.O.To use a single dash at the end of a sentence to add extra information Stanley digging his first hole

What thoughts and feelings would be going through his head?

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Bronze Silver Gold

Write down three words to describe the thoughts and feelings of Stanley

Complete silver and consider the effect Stanley's feelings have on his body. Complete bronze & then you must justify why the character is feeling this way.

Date: L.O.To use a single dash at the end of a sentence to add extra information Stanley digging his first hole

What thoughts and feelings would be going through his head?

Drained Aching Exhausted Dejected Isolated/lonely Desperate Resentful Frustrated

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Pain coursed through every muscle - he was overcome with exhaustion. What is this punctuation? What job does it do?

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Pain coursed through every muscle - he was overcome with exhaustion. It adds extra information. Both clauses can stand alone by themselves. The clauses must be relate to each other.

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Has a dash been used correctly in each sentence below? Why? Remember, there MUST be a full sentence before and after the dash and the information after the dash MUST relate to the first sentence.

• 1. Stanley was exhausted and desperately wanted to - rest.
• 2. Sweating and panting, Stanley thought of ways he could get out of

digging - he began eating breakfast.

• 3. With sadness in his heart, Stanley hung his head - he wish he could be at home.

Date: L.O.To use a single dash at the end of a sentence to add extra information

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Has a dash been used correctly in each sentence below? Remember, there MUST be a full sentence before and after the dash and the information after the dash MUST relate to the first sentence.

• 1. Stanley was exhausted and desperately wanted to - rest.
• 2. Sweating and panting, Stanley thought of ways he could get out of

digging - he began eating breakfast.

• 3. With sadness in his heart, Stanley hung his head - he wish he could be at home.

Date: L.O.To use a single dash at the end of a sentence to add extra information

Answer

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A single dash adds extra information to a full sentence. You MUST write a full sentence before you add a dash and extra information.

Stanley looked over the network of holes - his heart sank. Feeling dejected, Stanley trudged to bed - he had never felt so low. Stanley shook X-Ray's hand -

Whiteboard work

Complete the third sentence and write two of your own sentences using a single dash

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Date: L.O.To use a single dash at the end of a sentence to add extra information

A single dash adds extra information to a full sentence. You MUST write a full sentence before you add a dash and extra information.

Whiteboard work

Stanley looked over the network of holes - his heart sank. Feeling dejected, Stanley trudged to bed - he had never felt so low. Stanley shook X-Ray's hand - he knew they were friends now. Zero pierced his shovel quickly into the earth - Stanley had never seen anyone digging so quickly.

Examples

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Silver Gold Bronze

Put in the dash in the correct place in the sentence, for example, Add relevant information after the dash. Stanley ate breakfast quickly - he was ravenous.

Write four or five sentences including a dash to add extra information at the end to express how Stanley is feeling.

Envious and sorrowful, Stanley looked at Zero's hole - he wish he could dig faster.

Include parenthesis - show me that you can use parenthetic dashes as well as a single dash. Date: L.O.To use a single dash at the end of a sentence to add extra information

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Date: L.O.To use a single dash at the end of a sentence to add extra information Include parenthesis - show me that you can use parenthetic dashes as well as a single dash.

• Stanley, whose arms ached, dropped the shovel in exhaustion - he had

never felt such dejection.

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Answers

‐Stanley ached all over ‐ never in his life had he worked so hard. ‐Stanley couldn’t understand why anyone would want to be called Armpit ‐ he didn’t like to think where the nickname came from. ‐A dull ache pulsated through Stanley’s muscles ‐ would he ever finish digging the hole? ‐Stanley thought of his parents faraway ‐ he wondered what they were up to. ‐Sinking to the ground, Stanley rubbed his arms ‐ that eased the pain slightly.

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