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4/11/2014 Cherise Cherise Jones ones 2009 2009 UCI Grad: UCI Grad: BA Spanish; BA Spanish; BA BA Global Global Ideas Ideas for for Teachin Teaching Cultures Cultur es; Minor Minor in in Educatio Educational Studies Studies


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Ideas Ideas for for Teachin Teaching Common Common Core Writin Core Writing Cherise Cherise Jones Jones Cherise Cherise Jones Jones Mark Twain Elementar Mark Twain Elementary Dual Immers Dual Immersion Academ Academy

Cherise Cherise Jones

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2009 2009 UCI Grad: UCI Grad: BA Spanish; BA Spanish; BA BA Global Global Cultur Cultures es; Minor Minor in in Educatio Educational Studies Studies 2010 UCI 2010 UCI Grad: Multiple Grad: Multiple Subject Subject Crede Credentia tial: MAT : MAT 2010-2012 2010-2012 Viejo Elementary, CapoUSD: Viejo Elementary, CapoUSD: Dual Immersio Dual Immersion Kinde Kinderga rgarten; ELD ELD Adviso Advisor 2012- 2012-prese resent nt Mark Twain Elementary Mark Twain Elementary LESD; Dual LESD; Dual Immersion Immersion 3rd

rd Grade;

Grade; Writin Writing Coach Coach

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Common Common Core Core Writin Writing Standard Standards Opinio Opinion Writin n Writing Write Writer’s Works Workshop Write Writer’s Works Workshop Unit Unit Resou Resources

Units of Units of Study Study (Calkin (Calkins) Co Common Co mmon Core Writin re Writing g Bo Book (Owo (Owocki) cki) Common Core Standard Common Core Standards Common Core en Common Core en espa español

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Pin Pinterest erest Text xt T Types pes – – Tipos ipos del del te texto xto Opinion (Argument Opinion (Argument) Opinión Opinión (Argument (Argumento) Inform rmativ ative/Explana Explanatory

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Inform rmativ ative/Explana Explanatory

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T Textos tos Inf nforma

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tivos y Explicativ Explicativos

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Narr Narrativ tive T Textos tos narr arrativ tivos

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Trimester 1 Trimester 2 Trimester 3 Narrative Informational/Explanatory Opinion/Argumentative

Lawndale Elementary School District 3rd Grade Trimester Map in Writing

(40 Days*) (40 Days*) (40 Days*) Narrative Informational/Explanatory Opinion/Argumentative (10 Days*) (20 Days*) (20 Days*) Informational/Explanatory (10 Days*)

Text xt Purpos Purposes – es – What t the the st standard sa says ys

Write opinio Write opinion pieces pieces on

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topics or topics or te texts xts topics or topics or te texts xts, supp supporting ng a a point of point of view with view with reasons. asons.

Tipos pos de T e Textos xtos y sus y sus propósit ropósitos

Escr Escriben en propu propuest stas de de

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temas o tex extos, apoy poyando un punto punto de vista de vista con r con razones zones e inf inform rmación

Examples of Examples of Anchor Charts Anchor Charts

Anch Anchor charts charts are are tools fo tools for student r students to use during to use during Writin Writing g Wo Workshop rkshop an and aid children d aid children in in remembering remembering pro proce cedu dure res an s and d expect expectat ations. Chart Charts sho should ld be be made with the studen made with the students an and added to d added to throug ughout hout t the year. Teac Teachers rs may may remove remove when no longer when no longer needed. needed. Anch Anchor charts charts need to need to be be posted posted in the classro in the classroom where they where they are are easily easily access accessibl ible to to student students.

Post Post anch anchor

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chart arts from

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mini-lesso ni-lessons ns so so they ey are are easily easily accessibl accessible e to ch child ildren ren in ord in order r to serve as a resource serve as a resource for r their eir writ writing. ing.

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Have an Have an Opinio Opinion? Use the: Use the: What-Why-H

  • How s
  • w strategy

gy

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you’re w re working rking on

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research ch pa paper, this w per, this would d be be you your thesis. thesis. WHY WHY do do you you t think ink it it? Opinio Opinions don don’t just pop st pop up ou

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t of nowhere for nowhere for no no WHY WHY do do you you t think ink it it? Opinio Opinions don don t just st pop pop up ou

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As the s the saying goes goes: : “Ever veryone’s en enti titl tled to thei to their

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  • pinion.”

” But are you really? But are you really? Where’ Where’s you s your proof proof? Wha What examples examples or

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evid eviden ence can you n you come up me up with to with to ma make ke you your point point? For every rea For every reason

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have at l at leas ast t on

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e exam ample or ple or other

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kind of proof. proof.

Th The e key t key to a successful a successful arg argument nt is g is great eat support support.

Anchor Charts for Opinion Writing Anchor Charts for Opinion Writing

OREO OREO – Graphic Organizer Graphic Organizer

Opini Opinión Razone Razones Evid Eviden enci cia o ejempl ejemplos Opini Opinión

Chart to Chart to he help lp stude students build ts build the their opinion ir opinion – by by giving m giving more re re reasons/examp asons/examples, the es, their opinion is ir opinion is

  • nly stre
  • nly strengthened

ngthened

Overview of Opinion/Argument Within this unit of study, students will learn that writing argument essays involves not only writing an essay in which they make a clear claim and then shift towards including evidence. Students will learn that the challenge is also to reach and influence readers. There will be evidence that students write with readers in mind—sometimes directly addressing readers, sometimes writing in ways that show they are trying to evoke a response in readers, sometimes using voice to try to win friends and influence people. As you continue through the unit, you will confer with students one-on-one and monitor their progress in writing. You will note whether they state a clear claim and give reasons and supporting evidence. If necessary, you can create a small group for students who need extra support in developing one clear

  • stance. You will also note their structure and organization. A group (or perhaps

the whole class) may benefit from extra instruction on strategically ordering the sections of their essay and the information presented within each section. You will also probably find some students that need support with introductions, conclusions, and/or transitions to make the ideas in the essay flow smoothly. ~ Adapted from Lucy Calkins Grade 4/5, 2013

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Are we teaching opinion writing or Ar w t a hing opinion writing or persuasive/argumentative writing?

Possible Units of Study

Response to Literature Poster Letter Letter Review – Book, field trip, movie, project, lesson Special Event – Book fair, Earth Day, MLK Jr., Content – Science, Social Studies, Math The Writing Process – Proceso de Escritura Immersion - Inmersión Collecting - Coleccionando Selecting Escogiendo Unit Sequencing Selecting - Escogiendo Developing - Desarrollando Drafting - Redactando Revising - Revisión Editing – Correción Final Publishing - Publicando Celebrating - Celebrando

Parts of the Writing Lesson Partes de la lección en escritura

  • Set-up
  • Mini Lesson

Daily Lesson Sequencing

  • Mini-Lesson
  • Independent Writing
  • Partnerships
  • Independent Writing
  • Grammar Share

Adapted from – The Common Core Writing Book, Owocki, 2013

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Parts of the Writing Lesson Partes de la lección en escritura Connection – Conexión Teach Enseñar Mini-Lesson Sequencing Teach – Enseñar Active Engagement - Participación Activa Link – Enlace

Adapted from – The Common Core Writing Book, Owocki, 2013

Writer’s Workshop Writer’s Workshop – Nuts a Nuts and d Bolts Bolts Mana Manage geme ment nt Daily Wo Daily Workshop Schedu rkshop Schedule le Setup fo Setup for r studen students Meeting Area Meeting Area Visua Visuals to to assist assist – are there are there charts charts for for pro proce cedu dure res ro s routin utines es an and d strategie strategies? pro proce cedu dure res ro s routin utines es an and d strategie strategies? Chart Charts – do do charts reflect curren charts reflect current un unit it

  • f study?
  • f study?

Vol Volume – is is there eviden there evidence ce o

  • f daily

daily writin writing? g? Stamina Stamina – can student can students write for write for an an extende extended perio period o

  • f time?

time? In Indepe depend ndence ence Trans Transitions Supplies fo Supplies for r writin writing

Charts for Organiza Charts for Organizatio tion

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Reversible Writing Wall

Part 1 Part 1 Connection Connection

Give Give student student the the teachin teaching point of point of the the day day

Mini Lesson Structure – Generic

Yester Yesterday day, we we tal talked ab ed about

  • ut…

Today, I Today, I will will te teach ach you you… Remind Remind Point out Point out challe challenges nges Create new Create new goals goals

Part 2- Part 2- Teach Teach

How can we How can we make our make our demons demonstration pr proced

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ural al so so student students can can tr transf ansfer er the the de demonstr nstration to ation to the their own ir own work work?

Mini Lesson Structure – Generic

Watch Watch me me as as I… Think Aloud Think Aloud Model D l Demonstr trat ation ion Did you Did you notice notice how I how I… Create a Create a chart chart Make a a list list

Part 3 Part 3 - Active ctive Engagement Engagement

What What are are the coachi the coaching ng moves made in moves made in order

  • rder

to hel to help student students exper experience e success success wi with th the strategy the strategy?

Mini Lesson Structure – Generic

the strategy the strategy? Now it’s your Now it’s your turn. turn. Turn Turn and talk and talk to your to your partne partner r about about…

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Part 4 Part 4 – Link Link

What What language language can we can we use use to he to help lp build a build a re repe pertoi rtoire of re of strate strategi gies es

Mini Lesson Structure – Generic

So, r So, reader aders s today and today and ever everyday yday… Who Who think thinks the they will try this will try this strate strategy gy today? today?

Inmersión Inmersión Inmersión Inmersión

Lee Lee libros y libros y te textos par xtos para v ver r como los como los prof profesi esionales les escriben scriben en este n este géner género.

D D f ll h i l k h f Does

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not f foll llow

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typica cal l wor workshop

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format

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Lends itself Lends itself better to better to a a shared shared readin reading, close reading or close reading or inquire-based approach. inquire-based approach.

  • Teacher-created big books
  • Student texts
  • Trade books

Where Where do I find do I find these these texts? texts?

  • Class texts from shared writing

Coleccionando Coleccionando Coleccionando Coleccionando

Escr Escrib ibe todas las todas las ideas ideas que que puedas puedas acer acerca ca de lo de lo que quier que quieres s escribir escribir en tu en tu cu cuadern aderno.

  • How

How to to genera generate various ideas te various ideas

  • Mul

Multiple strategies iple strategies

  • Alle

Alleviating write g writer’s block block

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This idea stems This idea stems from from “lugares “lugares impo import rtantes” s”

Seleccionando Seleccionando Seleccionando Seleccionando

Piensa en Piensa en todas tus todas tus ideas y ideas y decidir en decidir en una una que que quisie quisieras lle s llevar h var hasta sta “publi publican ando do.”

STEP 1: Evaluate / Evaluar STEP 2: Try on / Probar ‐Can you think of reasons / ‐solve a problem ‐be reasonable ‐explained in a complete way to support your request? ‐Do you have enough to say about this? ‐Role‐play with a partner: How did you feel about supporting your opinion?

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STEP 1: Evaluate / Evaluar ‐solve a problem ‐be reasonable ‐explained in a complete way

Pedido ó queja 1. Ni mamá nunca me compra cosas nuevas. 2. Quiero un juguete nuevo. 3. Que la gente no fume en su auto. 4. Los cigarillos huelen muy mal. Pedido razonable ó pedido imposible 1. Que la maestra pare de dar tarea. 2. Que la maestra colecione la tarea el lunes en vez de viernes. 3. Que la gente pare de contaminar el

  • céano.

4. Que los estudiantes de mi escuela usen cajas de almuerzo en vez de bolsas de papel o plástico.

STEP 1: Evaluate / Evaluar ‐solve a problem ‐be reasonable ‐explained in a complete way

Que la maestra colecta la tarea el lunes en vez de viernes. Tengo karate, fútbol y natación después de clases.

Razones para nuestros pedidos

N

  • hago mi mejor esfuerzo

cuando estoy cansado. Los niños necesitan dormir 10 a 12 horas cada noche. Es importante que asista y participe en eventos familiares. STEP 2: Try on / Probar ‐Can you think of reasons to support your request? ‐Do you have enough to say about this? ‐Role‐play with a partner: How did you feel about supporting your opinion?

Write to Write to answer these answer these questi tion

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without t sto stopping pping. . When When I I mo move o ve on to the n to the next question, xt question, stop stop where where you you are and move are and move

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  • Patch of Thinking: Esto es importante a mi

porque…. ______ va a querer escuchar esto porque….

  • Partnerships: ¿Puedes ser mi mamá mientras

intento convencerle que …?

supporting your opinion? Studen Students wr write e request quest and and reasons reasons on

  • n a

a sticky sticky note to note to add add to the to the seed gar seed garden. en.

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Desarrollando Desarrollando Desarrollando Desarrollando

Hac Hacemos s la la idea más de idea más deta tallada con llada con toda todas la s las s part partes es del del género. género.

  • Teac

Teach the the specific specific aspects aspects of

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Possible Possible mini-lesso mini-lessons

  • The

he other

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side / El El otr

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Transition out of the notebook and onto loose-leaf paper

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inion writin ion writing

  • Devel

Develop in p in pieces pieces

  • Pair a

Pair a tactic/t tactic/táct ctica ica with a ith a reason listed reason listed fro from “Selec “Selecting” ng”

  • Student

Students test test these these pairings pairings betwee between reason reason and and tactic tactic. .

  • So

Some me will be will be used used in in draftin drafting an and o d others hers will will not. t. The he other

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ide / El El otr

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lado lado

  • Pull

Pull on

  • n the heart

the heart strin strings / s / Hablar Hablarle le al coraz al corazón

  • The solutio

The solution / / La La soluci solución

  • The

The deal deal / La oferta / La oferta

  • Kill with

Kill with kin kindness ss / / Sea Sea muy muy amable mable

  • It’

It’s easy! easy! / / ¡Es Es fácil! cil!

  • In

Introduction/Conclusion troduction/Conclusion

Qué la maestra colecta la tarea el lunes en vez de viernes.

Hablarle al corazón 1. Es importante que asista y participe en eventos

  • familiares. A veces tenemos una cena familiar para

celebrar una ocación especial y tengo que decidir entre la tarea o pasar tiempo con parientes que no entre la tarea o pasar tiempo con parientes que no veo con mucha frecuencia. 2. N

  • hago mi mejor esfuerzo cuando estoy cansado.

Sé que usted toma mucho tiempo en preparar la tarea y queremos respetar su tiempo. Si tuvieramos dos días más entregaríamos tarea completa y detallada como usted desea y que nosotros queremos entregar. Opportunity for research and a citation!

Redactando Redactando Redactando Redactando

Junta Juntamos todas las

  • s todas las partes en

partes en un un te texto completo. xto completo.

  • Re-readin

Re-reading

  • Deciding

Deciding

  • Piecing together

Piecing together

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Re Revisando visando Re Revisando visando

Leemo Leemos el el te texto comple xto completo y y hacemo cemos cambi cambios par s para que que tenga tenga sentid sentido y

  • y diga lo

diga lo que quer que queremo emos.

  • Forma

Formatting ting

  • Word Choice

Word Choice

  • Tactics

Tactics Match Desired Outcome Match Desired Outcome

  • Tone

Tone

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Checklists

  • Posted on writing wall
  • In student writing folders
  • In writing center

Editando Editando Editando Editando

Leemos con Leemos con cuidado par cuidado para error errores y s y hacemo cemos cambi s cambios. s.

  • Editing Che

Editing Checklist ist

  • Inclu

nclude what e what you you Re Recommendati mmendation: : Have students Have students go go through this through this che checklist ist

  • Inclu

nclude what e what you you have taught have taught in in the the Gr Gramma ammar Revi Reviews ews

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Include ever everyth ything from from pre previous ious gram grammar units r units through this through this che checklist ist inde independentl pendently Then Then have have them them explain to explain to a a partner partner what they what they changed changed and and why why Do not expect Do not expect perfecti perfection

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Publicando Publicando Publicando Publicando

¡Usam ¡Usamos papel papel blanco blanco par para escrib escribir ir nuestr nuestra a escritu escritura lo a lo mejor mejor posib posible! e!

Speeches Speeches L t L tt Lett tters ers Brochures Brochures Posters Posters Public Service Public Service Announcements Announcements

Celebr Celebrando ando Celebr Celebrando ando

¡Compart partimos n imos nuestras pub as public icaciones iones con la la clase, la clase, la escuela y escuela y la la comunid comunidad! d!

  • Trade and compli

Trade and compliment ment on

  • n sticky

sticky Trade and compli Trade and compliment ment on

  • n sticky

sticky notes notes

  • Author’

Author’s chair chair

  • Mail

Mail lette letters, hang poste hang posters, give give speech speeches es

  • Present to

Present to another another class class

Resources for Partn Resources for Partnership rships

Partnerships in Writer’s Workshop Purpose: Increase accountable talk using specific language To help students problem solve To push thinking p g Sentence Frames help ELL and SSL students develop language

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Each student has a writing partner and meets with the partner during many mid- workshop interruptions and share sessions (and is probably the partner with whom a writer talks during the mini lesson )

During the mini-lesson:

the mini-lesson.) Writers are partnered together to practice strategies taught. Students do not need to be ability matched Establish a meeting spot, routines, behaviors

Partners:

Work together to build language experience Meet daily Not a time to just help with editing (unless that is the stage that they are working on) Students can use sentence frames Students can use sentence frames

  • r starters to help spark the conversation.

Gives the teacher time to walk around and conference and assess.

Partnership Work Builds throughout the Year

Launching: Building a Community of trust Beginning of the year is the time to find partnerships. Having the students “try-out” different writing partners in the class. This way students are able to get to know others in their class, build trust, and then the teacher is able to observe and assess the abilities of her st dents ith the goal of getting the st dents to independence students with the goal of getting the students to independence. Teach the partners the routines and behaviors. Show them what they can say. Create anchor charts to reinforce these behaviors. In the next unit of study writers are paired up with “permanent”

  • partner. They can be paired by ability or not.

Show students how partners listen and all the behaviors during sharing of writing. Teaching students how to ask for clarification when they are confused.

Partner Work

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Colaboraciones que apoyan escritura

Tipos de colaboraciones y sus propósitos: Lenguaje: Compartiendo nuestro trabajo Los escritores pueden compartir partes de su escritura, trabajar en una estrategia específica, etc

  • Hoy yo trabajé en …

porque…

  • Estoy orgullsa de mi

trabajo como escritor en esta parte porque…

  • ¿Qué escribiste hoy?
  • ¿Puedes compartir tu

escritura conmigo? Responsabilidad: Los escritores pueden compartir objetivos uno con el

  • tro y platicar sobre su

progreso, tal vez se pueden dar sugerencias para lograr las metas.

  • Mi plan como escritor es….
  • Mis siguienetes pasos

pueden ser….

  • Me gustaría lograr esto

por…

  • Si me atoro, mí plan es…

Reacción: Los escritores pueden pedir y recibir información específica en algunas partes de su trabajo a lo largo del proceso.

  • ¿Podrías leer esta sección

y decirme si…?

  • Me gustaría alguna

reacción sobre esta parte porque ...

  • Quiero saber lo que

piensas acerca de esta parte…

Colaboraciones que apoyan escritura Continuación

Alentar y inspirar: Escritores pueden animar unos a otros y ayudar a los demás a través de cada taller y cada etapa del proceso.

  • Sé que esto es difícil, pero

podemos trabajar en ello juntos por…

  • Vamos a encontrar una

manera de que podamos resolver esto juntos ...

  • Pensemos sobre esto de
  • tra manera
  • tra manera…
  • Noté que estas trabajando

muy duro en… Enseñar: Escritores pueden preparar mini lecciones para ensenarle a

  • tros estudiantes estrategias
  • dar otras ideas durante

varias partes del proceso.

  • Me gustaría enseñarte algo

que he descubierto que puede ayudar ...

  • Esta es una estrategia que

me ayuda a mi….

  • Te puedo enseñar algo que

he tratado antes…

GRACIAS THANK YOU THANK YOU

cherise_jones@lawndalesd.net cherise.s.j@gmail.com