Heather Plett
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Effective Written Communication
Instructor: Heather Plett www.heatherplett.com
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Instructor: Heather Plett www.heatherplett.com
(see “student link” at bottom for notes)
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here, studying PR?
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asked for or appropriate.
up on time and not being disruptive.
share it when appropriate.
when appropriate.
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might not seem directly connected to business communication
communication & finding your personal voice
important than marks
arguing to prove yourself is not
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Where I’m From (by George Ella Lyon) I am from clothespins, from Clorox and carbon-tetrachloride. I am from the dirt under the back porch. (Black, glistening, it tasted like beets.) I am from the forsythia bush the Dutch elm whose long-gone limbs I remember as if they were my own. I’m from fudge and eyeglasses, from Imogene and Alafair. I’m from the know-it-alls and the pass-it-ons, from Perk up! and Pipe down! I’m from He restoreth my soul with a cottonball lamb and ten verses I can say myself. I’m from Artemus and Billie’s Branch, fried corn and strong coffee. From the finger my grandfather lost to the auger, the eye my father shut to keep his sight. Under my bed was a dress box spilling old pictures, a sif of lost faces to drif beneath my dreams. I am from those moments-- snapped before I budded -- leaf-fall from the family tree.
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and _______.
detail).
flower, natural detail)
_______ (name of family member) and _______ (another family name) and _______ (family name).
(another one).
items representing your family).
the _______ (another detail, and the _______ (another detail about another family member).
more lines indicating their worth).
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SCHEDULE LECTURE TOPICS PRE-READING November 12, 2012
Writing activities and sections for reading will be assigned from the course manual each week. November 19, 2012
November 26, 2012
messages
December 3, 2012
December 10, 2012
January 7, 2013
January 14, 2013
January 21, 2013
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VALUE ITEM OF WORK DUE DATE 10 marks Effective email November 26, 2012 15 marks Biography - effective sentences & paragraphs December 10, 2012 15 marks Letter January 7, 2013 20 marks Writing to impact change presentation January 21, 2013 30 marks In-class Exam January 14, 2013 10 marks Class Participation - Based on class participation & attendance Not applicable
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information technologies
types of workplaces
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project teams
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documents, presentations, and web pages
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now and where you want to be
defined
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strategies.
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(page 18)
characterize Canadian context:
social rules than people in some other cultures
suspicious of evasiveness, and distrust people who may have a “hidden agenda” - uncomfortable with silence
be conserved - time is equated with productivity, efficiency & money
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“once in a blue moon” , and jargon - “input, bottom line”)
into local currency, spell out months, etc.
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listening
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Planning
goals
audience
collecting
Drafting
favourite strategies
Revising
structure & format
& words
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Determining goals
goals?
Analyzing the audience
audience?
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Gathering & collecting
Analyzing & organizing
Choosing a form
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Being flexible
Keeping going
Using your own favourite strategies
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Revising contents, structure & format
more effective?
Editing sentences & words
Proofreading
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fax header
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respond when available
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intonation, facial expression, etc.)
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requires
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relationship - casual, informal, or formal?
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receiver’s end.
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discussion
attempts to resolve conflict
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An email inquiring about web hosting:
because we feel it is the only way to keep up with
in a crowded market. We have a lot of questions and need information about web hosting.
increase our product visibility in a crowded market.
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An email message announcing a professional development program:
writing and communication skills are invited to a training program beginning October 4.
investigating the possibility of developing a communication skills training program for some of our employees.
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interest in learning more about severance plans and separation policies. As most of you know, these areas of concern are increasingly important for most Human Resources professionals. A seminar entitled “Severance & Separation Benefits” is being conducted February 11. The following employees are attending the seminar: Dave Neufeld, Tayreez Mushani, and Gail Switzer.
repair, carpet purchases, travel arrangements, and many
have a Buying Power Card. All employees are eligible for their own private Buying Power Cards.
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information & interest that the recipient wants to open it (consider it a headline)
more info. if necessary.
formal/professional.
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signature (eg. company name, website, etc.)
they’re small & readable.
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is included.
information to too many people too
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distribution list.
list.
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“Action” , “Urgent”
titles
summarizing or highlighting important aspects briefly in the email body
forwarding
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Sender focus: To enable us to update
we ask that the enclosed card be returned. Our warranty becomes effective only when we receive an owner’s registration. Audience focus: So that you may promptly receive dividend cheques and information related to your shares, please return the enclosed card. Your warranty begins working for you as soon as you return your
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“I/We” View: I have scheduled your vacation to begin May 1. “You” View: You may begin your vacation May 1. “I/We” View: We have shipped your order by courier, and we are sure it will arrive in time for the sales promotion on January 15. “You” View: Your order will be delivered by courier in time for your sales promotion January 15.
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Exercise - Revise to emphasize the audience perspective and the “you” view
bank now requires verification of any large cheque presented for immediate payment.
we are asking you to complete the enclosed waiver.
to Las Vegas that includes deluxe accommodations, a Cirque du Soleil performance, and selected meals.
description of the manager trainee position you advertised.
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Unprofessional (low-level diction) badmouth guts pecking order ticked off rat on rip off TTLY Conversational (mid-level diction) criticize nerve line of command upset inform steal talk to you later
Formal (high-level diction) denigrate courage dominance heirarchy provoked betray embezzle I’ll be in touch soon about this
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Formal: All employees are herewith instructed to return appropriately designated contracts to the undersigned. Conversational: Please return your contracts to me. Formal: Pertaining to your order, we must verify the sizes that your organization requires prior to consignment of your order to our shipper. Conversational: We’ll send your order as soon as we confirm the sizes you need.
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representative will be making a visitation in the near future.
that your shipment was sent 9 June 2012.
accused her of ripping off office supplies.
determined to require corrective work.
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Negative: We are unable to send your shipment until we receive proof of your payment. Positive: We look forward to sending your shipment as soon as we receive your payment. Negative: You will never regret opening an account with us. Positive: Your new account enables you to purchase high-quality clothing at reasonable prices.
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Less courteous: You must complete the report before Friday. More courteous: Please complete the report by Friday. Less courteous: You should organize a car pool in this department. More courteous: Organizing a car pool will reduce your transportation costs and help preserve the environment.
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Less familiar: ascertain conceptualize encompass hypothesis monitor
perpetuate perplexing Alternatives: find out see include guess check working choice continue troubling
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Subject: Meeting Hi Jim. I just wanted to remind you about the meeting we have scheduled for next week. Let me know if you have any questions. Best wishes, Mark
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Subject: Reminder of Meeting, 10am on July 30 on harassment policy Hi Jim I just wanted to remind you about the meeting we have scheduled for Monday, July 30, at 10:00 am. It’s being held in conference room A, and we’ll be discussing the new harassment
present, along with the human resources team. If you have any questions, feel free to get in touch (954-3024). Best wishes, Mark
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the email? does it have a due date? (task? respond? read?)
needs to be included or attached?
your message in the subject line?
http://workawesome.com/communication/ effective-email-communication/
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request that they consider putting a stop sign on your street to slow traffic.
local community centre to host a celebration for your sports team.
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creativity) - approx. 50%
10%
breakdown.
to improve your grade.
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