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- Why stories work
- Crafting your narrative
- Resources to build your story
What we’re talking about today
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Stories are for entertainment
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Stories are for convincing
Science vs Stories
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Statistics are people with the tears wiped away.”
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– DR. IRVING J. SELIKOFF
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Science + Stories
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Stories capture nuance and feeling You want to communicate the intangible and emotional
DATA GAP STORY BENEFIT
Stories complement data
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Stories capture nuance and feeling
It’s hard not to like someone
- nce you know their story.”
“
– FRED ROGERS
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DATA GAP STORY BENEFIT
Stories complement data
Stories capture nuance and feeling
You can gather stories any time
You want to communicate the intangible and emotional
You don’t have results
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You can gather stories any time
http:/ /viaproject.org/ourwork/asthma.asp
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DATA GAP STORY BENEFIT
Stories complement data
Stories capture nuance and feeling You can gather stories any time
The language of stories is universal
You want to communicate the intangible and emotional You don’t have results
You aren’t talking to academics
DOPAMINE
the brain releases dopamine into the system when it experiences an emotionally-charged event, making it easier to remember and with greater accuracy.
CORTEX ACTIVITY
when processing facts, two areas of the brain are
- activated. a well-told
story can engage many additional areas including the motor cortex, sensory cortex and frontal cortex.
The language of stories is universal
NEURAL COUPLING
a story activates parts in the brain allowing the listener to turn the story in to their own ideas and experience thank to a process called neural coupling.
MIRRORING
listeners will not only experience the similar brain activity to each
- ther, but also to the
storyteller.
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DATA GAP STORY BENEFIT
Stories complement data
Stories capture nuance and feeling You can gather stories any time The language of stories is universal
Stories are sticky
You want to communicate the intangible and emotional You don’t have results You aren’t talking to academics
You want to build enthusiasm
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Stories are sticky
“ The origin of my interest in organizational
storytelling was simple: nothing else worked…. I gave people reasons why the idea was important but they didn't listen. I showed them charts and they just looked dazed. In my desperation, I was willing to try anything and eventually I stumbled on the power of a story.”
– STEPHEN DENNING
Crafting your narrative
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Stories in (scientific) writing
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Start with a plan
What is my purpose? Who is my audience? Who’s my hero?
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Why are you telling this story?
Audience Purpose
To develop empathy for others To describe what’s possible To build conviction in your mission Other I want this story to help people feel…
Hero
v v v
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A clear purpose yields easier editing
Audience Purpose
To develop empathy for others To describe what’s possible To build conviction in your mission Other I want this story to help people feel… Inspired by a different way of care that empowers the patient. I want them to feel optimistic that this is a solvable problem. I want them to feel like innovators in new approaches so they’ll be patient as we learn.
Hero
v v v X
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Prioritize your purpose
Audience Purpose
To develop empathy for others To describe what’s possible To build conviction in your mission Other I want this story to help people feel… I want them to feel like innovators in new approaches so they’ll be patient as we learn. I want them to feel optimistic that this is a solvable problem. Inspired by a different way of care that empowers the patient.
Hero
v v v X
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Think about your audience
Audience
Who are they? What are they trying to achieve? What do you think they should do differently?
Purpose
To develop empathy for others To describe what’s possible To build conviction in your mission Other I want this story to help people feel… I want them to feel like innovators in new approaches so they’ll be patient as we learn. I want them to feel optimistic that this is a solvable problem. Inspired by a different way of care that empowers the patient.
Hero
v v v X
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Align your story with what matters
Audience
Who are they? gravitytank health funding grant givers: Scott and Chris What are they trying to achieve? Make meaningful change in health
- utcomes through patient-centered
interventions National recognition Ongoing funding What do you think they should do differently? Give us money! Think about actionable learnings not just success metrics
Purpose
To develop empathy for others To describe what’s possible To build conviction in your mission Other I want this story to help people feel… I want them to feel like innovators in new approaches so they’ll be patient as we learn. I want them to feel optimistic that this is a solvable problem. Inspired by a different way of care that empowers the patient.
Hero
v v v X
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Pick your point of view
Audience
Who are they? gravitytank health funding grant givers: Scott and Chris What are they trying to achieve? Make meaningful change in health
- utcomes through patient-centered
interventions National recognition Ongoing funding What do you think they should do differently? Give us money! Think about actionable learnings not just success metrics
Purpose
To develop empathy for others To describe what’s possible To build conviction in your mission Other I want this story to help people feel… I want them to feel like innovators in new approaches so they’ll be patient as we learn. I want them to feel optimistic that this is a solvable problem. Inspired by a different way of care that empowers the patient.
Hero
Who is your hero? You Parent Patient Tool Grant giver Other What is their name? Who else is involved?
v v v v v v v v X
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Build out the cast of characters
Audience
Who are they? gravitytank health funding grant givers: Scott and Chris What are they trying to achieve? Make meaningful change in health
- utcomes through patient-centered
interventions National recognition Ongoing funding What do you think they should do differently? Give us money! Think about actionable learnings not just success metrics
Purpose
To develop empathy for others To describe what’s possible To build conviction in your mission Other I want this story to help people feel… I want them to feel like innovators in new approaches so they’ll be patient as we learn. I want them to feel optimistic that this is a solvable problem. Inspired by a different way of care that empowers the patient.
Hero
Who is your hero? You Parent Patient Tool Grant giver Other What is their name? Antonio Who else is involved? Elaine (mom/side kick)
- Dr. X (mentor)
Amazing tool (weapon) Rescue inhaler (villain)
v v v v v v v v X X
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You’ve got your plan, so now what do you say?
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There are a lot of stories about stories
lunascientificstorytelling.com
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Deconstructing the stories we tell provides common story templates
FREYTAG’S DRAMATIC ARC CAMPBELL’S HEROES JOURNEY
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We can simplify the structure
who, where, what’s up?
context
what is the challenge?
conflict
how is the situation resolved?
closure
what is the defining moment?
climax
what did they do?
action
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There are often multiple challenges to face
who, where, what’s up?
context
what is the challenge?
conflict
how is the situation resolved?
closure
what is the defining moment?
climax
what did they do?
action
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Let’s build out some of the moments
- Raphael Luna
- postdoctoral
research fellow in biochemistry and molecular pharmacology
- at Harvard
Medical School
- studying
biochemical mechanisms of cancer
- working with 5
professors for 2 years on research manuscript
- continually
rejected journal
- exhausted by hard
work + rejection
who, where, what’s up?
context
what is the challenge?
conflict
how is the situation resolved?
closure
what is the defining moment?
climax
what did they do?
action
- decides science
may not be the right field for him
- enrolls in creative
writing courses
- inspired by the
courses to rewrite the manuscript and resubmit for publication
- edits mercilessly
- prioritizes human
narrative
- professors love it
- top journal
publishes it
- writes The Art of
Scientific Storytelling
- launches Luna
Scientific Storytelling to help other researchers
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The two parts of a compelling story
The Anecdote ties together the series of moments The Reflection tells people why it’s important
1 2
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Anecdotes with reflections make effective stories
Anecdote No anecdote Reflection No reflection interesting but useless boring but true memorable + effective boring and useless
Tips to crafting your story
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Share universal “life” moments.
Rough it out and pitch it to others
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Details help the moments stick
Jack sustained fatal injuries in an auto accident.”
“
Jack was killed by a semi trailer that rolled
- ver on his car and
crushed his skull.”
“
less vivid more vivid
Nisbett, R & Ross, L (1980). Human inference: Strategies and short-comings of social
- judgement. Englewood Cliffs. NJ: Prentice Hall
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Details help the moments stick
Jack had an asthma attack on the way to school.”
“
Jack was walking to school with his little brother when he felt his chest get tight. He didn’t want his little brother to worry so he tried to ignore it, but before reaching the elementary school he was wheezing and struggling to breath.”
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less vivid more vivid
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